Sana's melt down (m)
Anime/Fandom: Innocent Venus
Characters: Sana, Joe, Jin
Spolers: <sub>reveals sana's soft side to joe
Contents: Builds ups and sneezing.
Rated: E
Warning: may cause melting heart sydrome or drooling attack or extreme sympathy or massive nose bleeding (so read at your own risk)
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Jin and Joe were guarding Sana from outside of the tent it was rainy and cold outside Jo shivered abit. "You ok Joe?" Jin asked. The dark haired boy nodded silently. Sana was sleeping silently inside the tent and turned abit. Soon Jo felt a itch in his he tried to ignored to it. "Are you sure?" Jin the white haired boy asked "I said I'm fine" Jo replied abit annoyed. Jin just shook his head and went back on guard duty. The itch came back but alil stronger "Heh..heh..heh..." he started then it went away for a while. Sana was hugging a pillow thinking it was Jin. Alil while later Jo's sneeze came back "Heh..not..aga...ah..heh..IKSHAH!" he sneezed loudly and wetly enoigh to wake up sana.
"Even If you say you're not sick I won't believe you now because of your nose color" Jin said he was right Jo's nose was now pink-ish. He sniffled abit Luckly there weren't any pirates or goverment workers around in miles where they were camping out or else Jo would've blew off their cover. "I don't care what you say but you need to sleep" Jin said. "What adout the girl?" Jo said abit abit congested "I'll take care of her you need to sleep" Jin replied. Jo went inside the tent and sneezed "Ikshh". Sana never seen like this before she had always thought he was scary to her but now she has seen a new side of Jo and got her curious. Jo laid down in the sleeping bag and fell asleep.
Sana went up to him to saw his pink nose immiedetely her heart sank to the deepest part of her chest and made her felt sorry for him. She blushed abit and poked his nose lightly. "IKSHOO!" Jo sneezed violently on her leaving a soft shocked sana sitting next to him.


TBC
Plot of chapter two: Somehow Jo spreads his cold to Jin which causes sana to nurse them to back but will she be able to survive this fate?

It's very sweet.

awww thanks im still trying to get the parts for part 2 (where Jin is not evil grahhhh!!! >w>) WHY!?

I don't know these characters, but those build-ups drove me crazy.

I'm glad you like it
(i ish happeh that i can access the site again since i couldnt for the past few days >>)

when my i couldnt use my old comp i lost motivation (because i had to use a ball mouse instead of optical which i prefer more the mouse could only go up and down) and right now im trying to regain my motivation the only way i can regain it back is if someone does a vampire knight fick with kaname and zero sneezing their butts off and Keade taking care of em

Hey, I don't know any of the characters, but I really like this drabble. I looooove the idea of someone being stuck outside in the rain with a cold! And of course eventually getting inside to get some much-needed rest.

holyfrickinggodthatwassohotimdroolinglikeanidiot!!

Oh please oh please write more! *fans herself* now if you'll excuse me I'm going to mop up the big puddle of saliva by my chair..