Hey guys i thought i would try out and make a story i'm not sure how good it is and its kind of short but let me know what u think if i get good reviews i might make a part 2 but i may make it in the adult board so here it is


So one day this one guy named Colton 20 years old went out to go get his friend who lived not far from him only a few blocks down the road. When he got to his house he rang the doorbell and instantly his friend named Jack also 20 answered the door and invited him in.
“Hey did u want to have lunch colt”? Asked jack
“Sure” Colton replied
So they had lunch and right where Colton was sitting was a window that was open. The sun was shining very nice warm day and for the first time Colton started realizing while he was eating lunch that his eyes felt watery he kept rubbing them but tried to be very discrete about it. He did not want Jack to notice. So right around the time they were almost done eating lunch Colton’s nose started to feel a tickle and he kept rubbing his nose and it would not go away so right when he finished eating the tickle got to the point where he had to sneeze so he closed his eyes with his mouth open waiting as he felt the sneeze come up and he started getting the hitching breath ahhhh ahhhh ahhh and he almost sneezed but it went away and as soon as it went away it came back haa mmmmpchooo!
“Bless u” said Jack
Colton did not respond instead he got ready for another sneeze haa mmmmpchooo! Haaa mmmmpchooo haa mmmmpchoo three of them right in a row. He quickly got up from the table to grab a tissue and go blow his nose and he was fine for a while after that.
“Hey colt did u want to go to the park”? Asked Jack
“Umm yea I guess sounds fun” responded Colton
So they both got ready and as they were getting ready Colton was still rubbing his nose and as they started walking he felt a sneeze come up really fast haa mmmmphh then right when he thought that was it another fast one came up and he was not able to catch it this time haaachooooo haachoooo haaammmmchooo haammmchooo
“Bless u” replied Jack
“This is like the most I have ever sneezed I don’t know what is wrong with me” said Colton.
So finally they got to the park and they were just hanging out on the swings when all of a sudden Colton got a very huge tickle and he was trying so hard not to let himself sneeze cause there were a lot of people in the park and even though he stifled his sneeze he still did not want to draw attention to himself. Finally he could not hold out any longer and he started sneezing like crazy haa mmmmpa mmmmpchooo mmmmpchooo haaa ha mmmmpchooo choo mmmmpchoooo mmmmmpchooooo
I ca ca mmmmpchooo can’t stop sneezing
Mmmmpchooo mmmpchooo
Wow replied Jack that was crazy u sure u ok?
I don’t know this is crazy said Colton
Then after they started walking home and again all of a sudden he had the biggest sneeze fit yet it came up so fast he had no time to stifle them it was like 15 right in a row haaachoooo haaachoooo haachooo haaachooo haachooo haaachoooo haachoooo haachooo haaachooo haaachoooo haachooo haaachoooo haaachooo haachooooo hachoooo
Holy crap u better see a doctor dude u may have allergies or something said Jack
Yea I think I’m going to replied Colton
So when he got home he told his mother about his adventure to the park and she took him to the doctor and sure enough he had allergies and got allergy medication Colton never had such an experience like that in his life till now so he must have developed an allergy to something in the outside air.

The End

wow! amazing, would def love you to carry this on!

This was cute.
Nice job on your first story here! :]

good job and soooo many sneezes =)

Seconded!

Fantastic! The more male sneezing, the better. :